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href="http://storymentor.com/telling-your-story.html">Telling Your Story on the Web</a>.</p><p>As a result, I have been thinking a lot about how websites need to be designed&#8211;and what kinds of information they need to contain&#8211;in order to successfully build relationships with visitors and encourage them to return again.</p><p>Some of the basic truisms about website design include making sure that the website is easy to read and easy to navigate. It should also answer your visitors&#8217; questions, offer them solutions, and help them get to know who you are: the person behind the company.</p><p>Above all, your website should NOT add any stress to your visitors&#8217; lives or give them a reason to leave and never return!</p><p><strong>If you want a website that truly grows your business, think twice before you introduce any of the following into your website design:</strong></p><ul><li><strong>Stylized, flashing entry pages with little or no text</strong></li><p>People surf the web for information. When they land on your home page, they want to know in about 3 seconds whether or not your site contains the information they&#8217;re looking for. If your home page consists mainly of graphical moving parts that present a &#8220;look&#8221; rather than information, your visitors are likely to leave without bothering to read further. This is ESPECIALLY true if the entry page requires them to search for (or even worse, chase after) the button that opens up the main part of your website.</p><li><strong>Automatic downloads of voice overs, music or videos</strong></li><p>A website that automatically hits visitors over the head with voice overs, music or videos is irritating! If a visitor is particularly interested in your product or service, she may put up with the bombardment once, but she will NOT return&#8211;ever again. All of these features CAN be effective, but only if you give your visitors the option to play them if&#8211;and when&#8211;they want to themselves.</p><li><strong>Pages that are hard to read</strong></li><p>Many web designers just love putting white text on a black background because black looks hip and edgy. They also love using really light gray text on a white background because it looks modern and cerebral.  However, both of these options are hard to read and strain the eyes. If your visitors are truly motivated, they might skim your text lightly, but they are unlikely to spend much time reading anything about you and your products/services in depth. They may also hesitate to return again.</p><li><strong>Websites that are hard to navigate</strong></li><p>I recently designed a completely new website for a wonderful Italian artist named <a
href="http://ettoredeconciliis.com">Ettore de Conciliis</a>. One of the reasons he needed a new site was that the navigation on his first website was so complicated. The web designer had uploaded small images of Ettore&#8217;s paintings&#8211;all smashed together&#8211;and then added interior navigation bars that forced visitors to scroll down the page to see a complete picture image, and then scroll sideways to see one image after another! Not only did this arrangement fail to show off Ettore&#8217;s beautiful paintings well, but the whole experience was extremely frustrating for visitors.</p><li><strong>Websites that lack information about you and your products/services</strong></li><p>Your visitors want to know what you have to offer, who you are as the business owner, and how you are different from your competitors. In other words, they want to know your story. If your website fails to tell a human story, your visitors will fail to connect with you as a human being, and they will soon leave.</ul><ul> <strong>The moral of this story is: </strong></p><p>Make sure your visitors&#8217; experience on your website is as positive as possible.</p><p>Create a home page that immediately lets them know what you do and whom you do it for. Make sure the text is easy to read and the navigation is simple and straightforward. And be sure to share a bit about your personal story because the key to growing your business through the web is developing relationships.</ul></p><ul
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class="wp-caption-text">APA Rules for References Have Changed!</p></div>I have been working as a freelance writer and editor since earning an MA in Writing/Publishing in 2004. Over the past six years, I have edited a lot of academic papers for professors around the world who are publishing in peer-reviewed journals.</p><p>If I do say so myself, I am pretty good at what I do! As far as I know, all of my professors have published their papers after I have edited them. And almost every new client becomes a regular.</p><p>So you can imagine my dismay when a paper I had edited for a long-time client (a professor in Taiwan) was rejected by his journal! They informed him that the references didn’t adhere to the correct APA style. At first, this mystified me because if there’s one thing I know by now, it’s how to convert references into APA style—and I knew that I had carefully done this for my professor’s paper.</p><p>The rejection letter from the journal explained that the references were missing DOI numbers—as required by APA&#8217;s 6th edition. I had never heard of of a DOI before, so I headed to Wikipedia for an explanation. Then I threw my APA Manual (5th edition) into recycling and ran out to buy the 6th edition. It turns out that they have made some major changes in this edition in regard to electronic sources.</p><p>Here is what I learned.</p><p><strong>Keeping Track of Electronic Sources</strong></p><p>The challenge today is that more and more journals are only published online—not in hard copy. Articles—even journals—come and go on the Web, which means that a link that worked today may not work tomorrow. Even when there is a hard copy, the electronic versions are sometimes updated when the hard copies are not.</p><p>Because scholarship depends on being able to locate the exact source cited by an author, this has become a big problem.</p><p><strong>What Is a DOI?</strong></p><p>To resolve the issue, a group of international publishers got together and created the digital object identifier (DOI) system, which assigns a unique alphanumeric string to each article. An article with a DOI enters a clearinghouse, so it can always be found on the Web. The DOI also serves as an embedded link in electronic references, so you can access the article simply by clicking on it.</p><p>After learning all of this, I spent five hours (!) researching each of my client’s references to see if a DOI had been assigned to it. I did find a few—especially among the more recent listings—and added them to his paper. (I also found a few discrepancies in my client’s references—such as years and article titles that weren’t quite accurate—so the exercise was actually worthwhile for him, too).</p><p><strong>Going Forward</strong></p><p>Clearly, more and more journals are going to require the DOI since it resolves a major issue in scholarship. Therefore, if you are a student, now is the time to understand what the DOI is. If you are a professor who specializes in a certain area of scholarship—and you use the same references over and over in your papers—it would be a good idea to research your references and add any DOIs to them that you can find.</p><p>Whether you are a student or a professor, be sure to add the DOIs to all of your references going forward.</p><ul
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class="wp-caption-text">Example of a Mind Map</p></div> <strong>Mind Mapping </strong></p><p>Let&#8217;s suppose you have learned your lesson. How will you approach your next article differently?</p><p>You decide to work with the dreamy, creative part of your brain first by experimenting with some prewriting techniques, such as mind mapping. You might even curl up on your bed with a cup of tea and put on some slow, rhythmical music (adagios from Mozart and Bach work especially well here) to calm your mind and put you in the mood for creating.</p><p>To mind map, you take a blank piece of paper and a pen (maybe even some colored pencils) and write down the major topic of your essay in the middle of the paper. Then you draw a circle around it. As your mind starts to make associations (and it will), you write down the next idea that comes to you. You draw a circle around it, too, and connect it to the first word with a straight line.</p><p>You continue this process—without judging or criticizing your ideas—as quickly as you can until circles and connecting lines fill the page. Now that you have plenty of material to work with, you allow the logical side of your brain to come to the fore.</p><p>You&#8217;re amazed at how easy it is to see which of your ideas are the most important, which provide support, and which are weak and irrelevant. In just a few moments, the framework of your argument has become clear: You know where you want to start, you know your most important points, and you know your conclusion. Only after you have completed this process do you move to the computer and begin typing. Once you do, you’re amazed at how easily your ideas flow out. In fact, your article almost writes itself!</p><p>Much better than getting bogged down in a murky, sulfurous swamp, isn’t it?</p><ul
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/> </a></div><p>I just replied to a question on another blog about when I realized I was a writer. I thought I would continue this discussion on my own blog. I&#8217;d also like to ask you a similar question: When did you know you were a ____ (writer&#8230;artist&#8230;coach&#8230;entrepreneur&#8230;scientist&#8230;whatever)?</p><p>Writing has always been as close to me as breathing. I grew up on a ranch in Montana in the days when there was just one television station, so I read constantly and wrote a lot of REALLY bad poetry as a teenager.</p><p>I also loved learning foreign languages, which in turn taught me a great deal about English. And I had a wonderful, inspiring English teacher when I was a junior in high school. Her name was Mrs. Quanbeck, and (30 years later) she is still my favorite teacher&#8211;even though I&#8217;ve since earned a BA and two MAs! (I tracked her down through the Internet last year, called her out of the blue, and told her how much she&#8217;d meant to me. It was wonderful talking with her.)</p><p>As an adult, I&#8217;ve taught writing and English as a second language to hundreds of college students, and I&#8217;ve written my share of corporate communications, too. I&#8217;ve also edited lots of stuff&#8211;business communications and academic papers, mostly.</p><p>My major passions revolve around human performance development and lifelong learning, so I tend to write nonfiction articles, ebooks, and ecourses that teach something.</p><p>What most astonishes me about writing, however, is the power it has to help us learn, create and heal. It is such a wonderful tool for self-discovery&#8211;whether we understand how to make our verbs agree with their subjects or not!</p><ul
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/> </a></div><p>I believe that every kind of writing tells a story—whether it is a blog, a personal statement for a graduate school application, a business letter, a scientific article, or the Great American Novel. Stories from our families, our communities, and the media form our worldview and shape our lives.</p><p>Our storytelling faculty appears to be innate; this means that we unconsciously seek a well-told story in everything that we read. When a piece of writing meets our expectations, it can have a powerful effect on us; when it doesn’t, it can leave us confused, irritated, even angry.</p><p><strong>Stories Help Us Learn</strong></p><p>Scientists have discovered that our natural ability to create stories is intricately connected to our ability to learn. This is because our brains seek to create meaning through relationship, and stories do this superbly.</p><p>Because stories form such an important part of who we are, it is important to understand their underlying architecture.</p><p><strong>Stories Have an Underlying Structure</strong></p><p>At the most basic level, every story has a beginning, a middle and an ending. The beginning draws the audience into the story and makes them want to hear it. The middle tells the basic events in some kind of logical order so that listeners can follow the story easily. Finally, the ending ties up loose ends and brings the story to a satisfying conclusion.</p><p><strong>Stories Are Targeted at a Particular Audience</strong></p><p>Successful stories are always targeted at a particular audience and use language and terminology the audience understands. This means storytellers never tell just one version; instead, they constantly revise their stories in a creative process that keeps them new and fresh. For example, they may add an extra dollop of humor in order to relax their audience and create a feeling of community; they may change their vocabulary and details when they tell the story to children; or they may change the order of events to add emphasis.</p><p><strong>Stories Use Concrete Details</strong></p><p>At all times, however, storytellers use concrete details and strong, active verbs to create forward movement and energy. Their language creates pictures in the minds of their listeners, and each word is important in moving the story along. Storytellers are also masters at creating rhythm. This means that their pace is sometimes fast, sometimes slow. Sometimes it stops altogether. This gives the audience the opportunity to absorb what has just been said.</p><p><strong>Stories Help Us Feel</strong></p><p>Above all, storytellers use emotion to connect deeply to their audience. Skillful storytellers can make us laugh or cry. Their use of emotion helps us identify strongly with the topic, engages us in the message, and unlocks our ability to create and problem solve. Emotions help us remember, they inspire us, and they move us to take action.<br
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/> What does this mean to you if you just want to write a business article?</strong></p><p>It means that you carefully write an introduction that captures your readers’ interest and tantalizes them with the essence of the message to come. It means that your ideas flow logically from one major point to another and that you avoid inserting ideas that are random or out of place. It means that you use concrete details, active verbs and strong nouns and avoid useless fillers and fluff.</p><p>And it means that you become adept at listening for rhythm, that you play with your writing until it &#8220;sings.&#8221; How do you do this? By always being willing to revise what you have written. By changing your vocabulary and the length of your sentences and paragraphs. By playing with different kinds of punctuation, using parallelism, and adding headings and subheadings when appropriate. Finally, you do this by being conscious of white space and giving your readers plenty of chances to stop, breathe, and absorb what you have written.</p><p>Most importantly, it means that you find ways to engage your readers’ emotions so that they care about your message.</p><ul
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/> </a></div><p>This blog revolves around a question for which I do not have an answer! (Maybe you can help me?) One of my Facebook contacts (Nikhil Kripalani) just published a quote by Patanjali that states:</p><blockquote><p>When you are inspired by some great purpose, some extraordinary project, all your thoughts break their bonds. Your mind transcends limitations, your consciousness expands in every direction, and you find yourself in a new, great, and wonderful world. Dormant forces, faculties and talents become alive, and you discover yourself to be a greater person by far than you ever dreamed yourself to be.</p></blockquote><p>I think this is an absolutely wonderful quote. (It sounds a lot like the one attributed to Goethe, doesn&#8217;t it?) This is why I have always admired (and to be honest envied) people who have found&#8211;or just seem to be born knowing&#8211;what their great purpose is.</p><p>One man I know&#8211;<a
href="http://www.ettoredeconciliis.com">Ettore de Conciliis</a>&#8211;is a superb artist in Italy. Ettore was born knowing he was an artist and has spent a lifetime just getting better and better at it.</p><p>My two biggest heroes are Greg Mortenson and Muhammad Yunus. Greg is the American author of two amazing books (<em>Three Cups of Tea</em> and <em>Stones into Schools</em>) that detail his successful efforts to build schools for girls throughout the remotest areas of Pakistan and Afghanistan. About 16 years ago, he just happened to stumble into the Pakistani village of Korphe after a failed attempt at climbing a mountain and ended up promising to return and build the people a school.</p><p>Muhammad is the Bangladeshi (and Nobel Peace Prize winner) who started the microcredit movement that has now moved thousands of people (mainly women and children) out of poverty around the world. Thirty some years ago, Muhammad just happened to loan a few dollars out of his pocket to a poverty-stricken group of women who wanted to start their own business. They paid the loan back with interest, and a worldwide movement began!</p><p>In other words, both of these men &#8220;accidentally&#8221; discovered their life&#8217;s mission and look where it has led them!</p><p>What about those of us who aren&#8217;t sure what we born to do? Who struggle throughout our lives to find the big &#8220;What&#8221;? How do we find a purpose that so inspires us that we transcend our limitations and literally move mountains, too?</p><ul
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